In my childhood dreams……..
My inner soul screams
“I can’t remember my motherland”
In the morning dawn, when I feel the briskly air….
When the scorching sun bends my back
And then I search for the snow sack
I have just one answer….
“I can’t remember my motherland”
In the’ good morning’ wishes
When I search for that affectionate “namaskar”
In the enchanting prayers of shivratri till navreh
There are words screeching ‘happy new year’
And I am in search of “navreh mubarak”
I have just one answer…..
“I can’t remember my motherland”
In the ancient temples when I search for kheer bhawani
Or when in McDonald’s I miss the dumaloo
When wandering on the m.g.road I search for that ‘lal chowk’
I have just one answer…..
“I can’t remember my motherland”
In search for heaters when I feel the kangri
Or while wearing all those branded cardigans
I miss my very own “pheran”
When in the’ rat race’ of today, I search for the peace and pace of life…
I have just one answer………
“I can’t remember my motherland”
But yes
In the killing of thousands
In the suicide bombers,
In the terrorism of today,
In the suffering of mankind,
In the tears of mothers
“I can remember my motherland”
“I can remember my motherland”
………………………………parul kaul
Glossary:-
navreh mubarak-happy new year
kheer bhawani-ancient temple in
lal chowk-market place
15 comments:
beautifully written...awsome work :-)
keep it up :D
evocative. ur words are as beautiful as the valley. its interesting to see how u find ur motherland in ways urban teenagers generally overlook.
Beautiful poem!speaks a lot about the nostalgia which every kashmiri suffers from when remembering his/her motherland!apt name!!!
keep it up! :)
A Necklace can be described; fusion of pearls and Kashmir can be described like you did.
Scintillating thoughts, which you have put together very well.
Keep the Good Work going...! I liked it...!
Navreh Mubarak,
I am not sure I have the right qualifications to really make a serious comment on your blog all I can say at this point in time is that it an honest thought but a little bit of research of our culture shall go along way in shaping your thought process
The poem struck a chord ... and revived many old memories..!!
Evocative words used with immense dextery to produce a spell binding effect....
superb parul!
Devashni :)
ur poem has just added more beauty nad life to kashmir..
this shows how gud u hav got ur "taaleem" from ur parents..hats off to them and u also..m really touched and inspired too..keep it up and god bless!!
Truly speaking......very effeciently convayed the voice of changing india n indian....
It's vety easy to lurn , but to remember what u had n what u have needs love...a love for motherland.
well written...
di!
its exuberent
seems my feelings via ur words!
bravo!
Woman, that was brilliant.
^_^
u know wat...honestly...m out f words....m so touchd..!!
hmmmmmmmmm.... thats all i can say .. been there ... seen all ... n can feel what (at least can try n understand ) u must be going thru...
brilliant piece of work......got goosbumps........
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